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Ryuuseis Twin swords

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Ryuuseis Twin swords

Post by Ryuusei Nara on Wed Nov 25, 2009 3:32 am

Name:Twin swords of elemental doom.
Apperance:theres two!
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History:Not much is known except that Ryuusei stole them from a travellar on his way to kirigakure.

Description:The sword is near enough unblockable, as shown it can only be blocked by the strongest of defenses(A-). Elemental chakra can be channeled through it. It can be controled using chakra. Also the user can join with this to gain a certain ability:
regenerates all wounds and(3 posts per wound):
lightning:the users body is filled with electricity and the physical capabilities are greatly increased.
Wind: The users attacks are very sharp and can peirce through rock.
water a field of water is around the user (50x50 meters)
fire:the user is ignited
earth:the user becomes very hard and immune to most damage.


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Re: Ryuuseis Twin swords

Post by Koujetsu Hanagayu on Wed Nov 25, 2009 10:49 am

A). You'd only be able to channel your elements through it, as the blade would respond to your elemental chakra.

B). Nigh unblockable is too much. Passing through any is also too much. The toughest defenses able to block a blade? Im asssuming you mean that only S-Rank jutsus can, while any weapon cannot? Not happening.

C). I wanna know the regeneration rate. You are not able to regenerate all wounds, especially without a cost.

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Re: Ryuuseis Twin swords

Post by xXLightxDarkXx on Wed Nov 25, 2009 11:48 am

"The sword is near enough unblockable, as shown it can only be blocked by the strongest of defenses. It with pass through any blade that touches it."

Here you go, take this copy of "BASIC ROLEPLAYING FOR DUMBASSES" and read it from cover to cover; do you expect ANY of us to approve of a blade that passes through another the moment it touches? Near unblockable? The strength comes from the person, NOT the blade; even a dull blade could kill if the person was strong enough. Just with this I'm going to say not approved.

"Elemental chakra can be channeled through it. It can be controled using chakra. Also the user can join with this to gain a certain ability:
regenerates all wounds and:"

I have no clue what that says but the end makes me wanna cry from laughing; NO regeneration of wounds. And to control with your own chakra, you better expect to lose a shitload of chakra.


"lightning:the users body is filled with electricity and the physical capabilities are greatly increased."


Hmmmm, again, chakra drainage. Still not approved. Well, I could approve of it on the grounds that I'll provoke you to use it then pick your dead body up and feed it to my dog; ever heard of someone being electrocuted to death? Think, genius!

"Wind: The users attacks are very sharp and can peirce through rock."

Wow, tree, yes, rock, HELL no. What is up with people and being so overpowering with their shit, seriously!

"water a field of water is around the user (50x50 meters)"

Hope you drown...>.> Explain the purpose of the water, 'cuz if you're planning on using it, state it here, where it might get approved.

"fire:the user is ignited"

Quick, get the gas tank! Specify how long it lasts!

"earth:the user becomes very hard and immune to most damage."

Immunity to damage without length, STILL not going to get you anywhere.

All in all, a word from yours truly

NOT FUCKIN' APPROVED!

Sorry buddy, caught me in the worst mood you'd ever want to see me in, especially if you're trying to pass this OP shit off as something usable on this site. And believe me, this is what most of the Admins think from the bottom of their warm beating hearts.

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Re: Ryuuseis Twin swords

Post by Ryuusei Nara on Thu Nov 26, 2009 7:14 am

scrap it,ill just use sasukes sword jutsu thing. This was actually not for yuu,sou or kuni to check i was testing other admins.

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