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Adlet - Shichibi

Post by Adlet Kyūketsuki on Fri Nov 20, 2009 4:56 pm

Please could I have the seven tails.
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Re: Adlet - Shichibi

Post by Adlet Kyūketsuki on Sun Nov 22, 2009 12:45 am

Bijuu Tail Descriptions

Tail Number: 1

Tail Advantages: The Chakra pool is increased by 50%. The chakra shield can block most E-Rank and D-Rank Jutsus. The user also becomes very hard to find or track. Earth type Jutsus are increased.

Tail Disadvantages: Jutsus require more chakra.

Effects on user: The users chakra control will lessen slightly temporarily afterwards.

Appearance chance of user: Blue chakra shield with one tail in the shape of a badger, this can change as Kaku can alter his form when near clay.



Tail Number: 2

Tail Advantages: The Chakra pool in increased by 100%. The Chakra shield can also now block E-Rank, D-Rank and some weaker C-Rank jutsus.

Tail Disadvantages: The users requires more chakra to preform all jutsus.

Effects on user: The users strength, speed and chakra control become temporarily weaker.

Appearance chance of user: The users hair becomes black with a white line through the middle. The chakra shield is now has two tails.


Tail Number: 3

Tail Advantages: There is now a small amount of control over sand. The Chakra Shield blocks E,D and weaker C-Rank Jutsus. Speed is also increased.

Tail Disadvantages: Kaku is more present, influincing what Adlet does. Jutsus require more chakra.

Effects on user: Speed, Strength, Chakra Control become much weaker. Adlet is now much harder to track, and even harder to find in the first place.

Appearance chance of user: Hair is black with white stripe. Chakra shield has three tails.

Tail Number: 4

Tail Advantages: The User has an increased smell and hearing. The Chakra shield can block all E,D,C ranked Jutsus. Earth Jutsus are greatly increased. Adlet's Chakra Pool is increased by 150%.

Tail Disadvantages: The user is left unconcious for around five minutes after using, there is also some skin loss. All jutsus now require a greater amount of chakra than the the first three tails.

Effects on user: The users smell increases. The user is left unconcious for a minute after using it. Strength is decreased temporarily for the rest of the battle.

Appearance chance of user: The user now looks like a minature Kaka, but with only four tails. The appearence can be changed from a badger when near clay.


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Re: Adlet - Shichibi

Post by Adlet Kyūketsuki on Sun Nov 22, 2009 1:09 am

Tail Number: 5

Tail Advantages: The Chakra Shield can block all taijutsu (Except S-Rank) and E,D,C, and some B-rank techniques. Adlet's Earth Jutsus are now much more powerful. The defensive techniques can channel lightening into the ground.

Tail Disadvantages: The user is no longer has his personality, his voice is Kaku's. The user falls unconcious after use, but only for about fifteen minutes.

Effects on user: The user falls unconcious for half an hour after using, although no real damage is done, except for some wounds hear and there, however, these wounds bleed quite badly so some minor healing is required. Strength is also reduced. As well as stamina.

Appearance chance of user: The user now looks exactly like Kaku, with five tails, and is twice the size of a normal human.


Tail Number: 6

Tail Advantages: Adlet now has control over all earthern elements. He can use sand, metal, earth, clay, and mud at will. His Chakra pool will increase by large amounts. And all earthen jutsus will increase in power extremley.

Tail Disadvantages: He is almost entirley controlled by Kaku. There is very little that Adlet controls, only enough to stop himslef/kaku killing certain people.

Effects on user: The user falls unconcious, with some damage to external skin, resembling that of bites. Adlet will be unconcious for hours before recovering. The users can also accsess Kaku's chakra when required from now on. The chakra Shield can block all taijutsu attacks and E,D,C,B rank jutsus

Appearance chance of user: The user will appear as a rather large badger, with six tails. He is four times the size of a normal human.


Tail Number: 7

Tail Advantages: The user has much stronger control over metal, earth, clay, and mud. He will be able to accsess almost all of Kaku's chakra. Adlet can use Kaku Release: Doton Bakufuu Jutsu. His Chakra Shield can block B,C,D,E and some weaker A-rank jutsus and all taijutsu, except S-Rank. His chakra pool is increased massivley.

Tail Disadvantages: The only control Adlet has over himslef/kaku, is to force Kaku to use Doton Bakufuu. Kaku can freely use this anyway.

Effects on user: Adlet will have major damage to skin and some minor damage on his internal organs. He must be rushed to hospital immediatly. If he recovers, then Adlet will become impossible to find, the only way you will ever find him, is for him to find you. His hearing, smell and sight are greatly increased, he can even see in pitch black. His chakra pool is increased by 50%.

Appearance chance of user: Adlet appears as a seven tailed badger (Can be changed). Four times the size of a normal human.


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Re: Adlet - Shichibi

Post by Adlet Kyūketsuki on Sun Nov 22, 2009 5:51 pm

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Re: Adlet - Shichibi

Post by Koujetsu Hanagayu on Mon Nov 23, 2009 1:54 am

Even as full 9 tails, I cannot block all A-rank Ninjutsu. Secondly, we have yet to determine the amount of chakra each tail gives the Jinchuriki, so 10x is a bit much at the moment. Also, if a taijutsu user hits you with a S-Rank taijutsu attack, you will feel damage, shield or not.

Sand is a KKG element on this site, so that is allowed to be manipulated to a point.

If you have Clay, thats fine. The second explosions come into play, the clay gets removed.

For tail 5, 5 minutes of unconciousness is way to little of a disadvantage. Damage will be done from tails 4+, so that needs to be accounted for.

Tail 4, a minute of unconciousness as the only real disadvantage is still too little.

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Re: Adlet - Shichibi

Post by Adlet Kyūketsuki on Mon Nov 23, 2009 2:09 am

Done,

I can assure you that there will be no explosions as deidara can only use it as he mixes it with his explosive chakra.
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Re: Adlet - Shichibi

Post by Adlet Kyūketsuki on Tue Nov 24, 2009 1:19 am

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Re: Adlet - Shichibi

Post by Koujetsu Hanagayu on Tue Nov 24, 2009 1:20 am

Please stop the constant bumping. This will be taken care of when it can.

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Re: Adlet - Shichibi

Post by Adlet Kyūketsuki on Tue Nov 24, 2009 1:46 am

sorry
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Re: Adlet - Shichibi

Post by xXLightxDarkXx on Wed Nov 25, 2009 12:42 pm

Now, I may seem like a total dick for this, and I'm not apologizing cuz this is kind of fun, to vent on you n00bs, but I don't think you're capable of handling a Bijuu. As he said, the chakra amount has/will be determined by the designated Admin, who are working on the template. The disadvantages are WAAAY miscalculated here; have you seen Kyuubi? 3 tails was enough to send good 'ol Naruto on a rampage. 4 tails had him bleeding to the point that it was critical if he didn't have the Kyuubi's chakra there to heal it. Let me break it down for you, and do expect I'll be snapping your bones on the way through this thing.

"Tail Number: 1

Tail Advantages: The Chakra pool is increased by 50%. The chakra shield can block most E-Rank and D-Rank Jutsus. The user also becomes very hard to find or track. Earth type Jutsus are increased."

Alright, as you know, chakra amount is unknown. Blocking E-Rank and D-Rank jutsus? Naaaah, nope, weaken maybe, but no nullifying; still gotta do some damage. Hard to find or track; you going groundhog mode? Explain why you're hard to find or track. "Earth type Jutsus are increased": again, explain; does this mean that the chakra used is increased or the strength of the damned jutsus.

"Tail Disadvantages: Jutsus require more chakra."

Irony, thy name is stupid. You needn't a disadvantage for the first tail. >.>

Tail Number: 2

"Tail Advantages: The Chakra pool in increased by 100%. The Chakra shield can also now block E-Rank, D-Rank and some weaker C-Rank jutsus."

Block E-Rank and weaken D-Rank while taking away about a quarter's damage of C-Rank jutsu. Wanna argue?

"Tail Disadvantages: The users requires more chakra to preform all jutsus."

Move the first disadvantage onto this one; I'm showing you mercy.

"Effects on user: The users strength, speed and chakra control become temporarily weaker."

Tell me, how long is "temporarily"?

Tail Number: 3

"Tail Advantages: There is now a small amount of control over sand. The Chakra Shield blocks E,D and weaker C-Rank Jutsus. Speed is also increased."

Still the same from above. The sand bit, I'm not caring much; same with speed.

"Effects on user: Speed, Strength, Chakra Control become much weaker. Adlet is now much harder to track, and even harder to find in the first place."

So, you've gone weak groundhog mode? Explain what this means.

Tail Number: 4

"Tail Advantages: The User has an increased smell and hearing. The Chakra shield can block all E,D,C ranked Jutsus. Earth Jutsus are greatly increased. Adlet's Chakra Pool is increased by 150%."

Take this gun, it's loaded, go to the corner, and shoot yourself; make sure you don't get blood everywhere. Blocking all E, D, C jutsus make you seem invincible, which you're not, and it will not be allowed because other Jinchuurikies are sustaining damage, still, at this level. And if not, I'll make sure to pay them a visit...I've still got a large collection of guns...Again with the Earth Jutsus, explain WHAT increases.

"Tail Disadvantages: The user is left unconcious for around five minutes after using, there is also some skin loss. All jutsus now require a greater amount of chakra than the the first three tails."

Five minutes of unconsciousness will not compensate for your blocking of all jutsus up to the C ranking; show me at least an ounce if intelligence, man!

"Effects on user: The users smell increases. The user is left unconcious for a minute after using it. Strength is decreased temporarily for the rest of the battle."

Apparently, body odor comes into play here; note, kids, always use deodorant, cuz if this guy takes a whiff and passes out for a minute, then you know for SURE you've done something wrong. Why are you left unconscious? Is it because you used your increased smelling ability? Or using the tail altogether, cuz this really rebels against your five minute idea.

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Post by xXLightxDarkXx on Wed Nov 25, 2009 12:53 pm

Alright, I'm done here, four tails is enough to prove that you're not good enough to wield a Bijuu. Either totally remake this or walk away now and make a normal character. I'm locking this and leaving my last remark: NOT APPROVED.

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